30DAIH: Day Sixteen

Day Sixteen: Draw a single page comic with 5-7 panels (the story begins and ends on one page).


Before you ask, yes this is the best I could do... when I started doing this challenge I said I would use as many medium as I could; so when I spotted comic of the list I thought I would try with digital. I did it, just not very well.

So while I'm well aware that this is a load of rot, please share with me your thoughts on where I went wrong and how I can improve.

So this is a follow up to day fifteen, where Aodhan's family is being chased. If you read Aodhan's bio/history, he was wrongly accused and hates people who blindly think others have been wrong without knowing all the fact. Even though he knew it was most likely that it is his family causing trouble.


Day Fifteen - Part Three:

Day Seventeen- Part One:

Journal:
30 Day Art Improvement (Hell) ChallengeTaken from AbelPhee's journal:

I'll link my progress under the list
30 Days of Art Improvement Challenge
Are you tired of feeling like your art just isn't improving? Do you want to do a 30-day challenge that's actually useful? Welcome to 30 Days of Improvement Hell.
I made this because I've been feeling super 'blah' about my art these days, and I needed something to kick-start myself. Who wants to do this with me!? Start now or whenever you can (now you procrastinators!). Challenge yourself and have fun at the same time!
Tag your posts with #Improvement Hell (more for Tumblr posts, but I suppose you can do it here too) so everyone can follow along and see each other's awesome artwork.
What are you waiting for? START!
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